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Remember me saying that the fire on his Cutiemark meant something special? :P THIS IS IT!~

Story time :3

Basically, the way he discovered this was by whilst he was playing with some of his Phoenix friends :D He had his Cutiemark but he always felt like there was something missing. There was one moment when he was playing with his phoenix friends and he felt like there's something he should be able to do but he didn't know what. With that curiosity, he had seemed to be slightly upset and confused and the Phoenix's questioned him on why. All he responed with was by saying
"I feel like... I'm just, missing something..." As he didn't know, and the Phoenix's wanted to cheer him up, the Phoenix's all came together quickly and planed something. Once there plan was all together one of them said to him
"lemme show you a little secret." As they got Shyfire's attention they showed him that they can activate there "Fire body" without flying and they told him how they do it. Their plan was to lift him into the air as he did what they said and put fire around him but not close enough for him to get burnt so that way he would feel he's learnt a new trick. So as they told him to close his eyes and try, he did exactly as they told him and suddenly he set fire exactly as they said he would. To their surprise, they thought they accidentally set him on fire so a few of them quickly set off to get water to take it out before he got seriously hurt, although, he wasn't complaining about the burning... As the main Phoenix kept instructing him on what to do he said he felt warm inside, like something had been for filled. As the other Phoenix's got back carrying a lot of water with other animals help they all threw the water on him and as the water hit Shyfire he jumped and opened his eyes... The confusion started when the fire was still on him.
"My gosh man you lot got me good" Chuckled Shyfire, not realising he was still on fire. As he turned around he saw all his animal friends was looking at him with a cautious and worried face. "Hmmm? What's wrong?" he questioned. They all pointed straight at him.
"Oh gosh what did I do this time?" he continually questioned. As he did that one of the deer's quickly ran off and grabbed a mirror from their home bringing it back in a rush. As the deer finally came back she put it against a tree and Shyfire slowly walked up to it as all his friends slowly moved out the way.

For a moment he just stared into the mirror and with all the confusion he had the fire went off and he fainted from the simple fact that he was on fire. The fire didn't hurt him he was just extremely confused. As all his animal friends worried about him they brought him to one of the (Phoenix plural is Phoeni.. Yea I made that up xD) Phoeni Care Facilities all the way at Hollow Shades. (images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__c... It was pretty far away as there were at Neighagra Falls, so they really needed to hurry but as they was on their way Shyfire woke up.
"Oh wow I just had the craziest dream," He mumbled as he stretched. As he opened his eyes he realised he was in the hands of a bear and jumped off and flew into the air and hovered near all of them.
"That wasn't a dream was it?" He questioned in fear. And animals all said No in sync.
"My gosh Shyfire are you alright?"
"Shyfire Shyfire! How did you do that?!"
"Dam you had us all scared"
As question barricaded Shyfire he looked towards the Phoenix that had told him what to do and asked
"Phelo(DAT NAME xD), was that seriously supposed to happen?" and Phelo responed
"That wasn't what we had planned at all... As you was upset we wanted to cheer you up by giving you a feel of what it's like to be a Phoenix; we always knew you wanted to know what it's like but we couldn't ever give you a proper feel for it so we came up with a plan that went wrong quickly... Now that we know you can do that I really wanna teach you everything else as I didn't know a pony can do that any ways. Pretty cool when you think about it. Oh and I think the reason you felt un-for filled is now gone" As Phelo said that he pointed towards Shyfire's flank and noted "That flame in the middle wasn't there before, and I know how you ponies find that picture on you butt important" he chuckled and winked at Shyfire. To Shyfire's surprised he flew straight up into the air and shouted in joy
"Finally! I knew something was missing!" As he came back down he hugged every friend there and requested Phelo to teach him the rest later after he's gone off and chatted with his family; as Phelo agreed, Shyfire flew off in a rush to get straight back and learn the rest.

And that is how he got the second part of his Cutiemark :3
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PuffySmosh's avatar
AWW!! (i think i am crying) beautiful story very well made! And drawing... too awesome to comment!